i am feeling not very happy about the outcome of the physics essay competition. didn't get into top 5.

:'(

oh well. i would really appreciate it if some guy out there could give comments on the quality and accuracy for the contents of my essay. Don't worry, its quite easy to follow.

CLICK HERE TO READ MY ESSAY... and understand why i'm not happy.

sorry i cannot simply paste the essay here... it is a little bit mathematical.